crit
first off, it was a great game, interesting. although i will point out the falws i found, to help you with your next project (whcih im sure is going to be as great as this).
1- there was no way to skip anything, so i had to watch the cutscenes, im sure you put alot of work into it, and you want people to view your work, however, i just saw pirates of the caribben 2, so i doubt your story would compare to that. point beign i dont care, and it became annoying how i had to sit there and watch the animations.
2- the games dragged on, and didnt feel hugly dynamic, good mini fun games, just not partically "epic". music and perhaps some more "loud" graphics would help with this.